I commented on Andrew's and Felicia's.
After reviewing other student's letters, I found that they were able to integrate other pieces of work they have done in the past into their paper. Also, the other students papers all mentioned their writing process and did a good job at telling whether they changed their style or kept it the same. As for my paper, I need to make improvements such as integrating my previous work and giving more detail about how writing has affected me in subjects outside of school.
Steven
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