Here is my link of my paragraph analysis. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ATXn_UWPDwv3oNFUHhDym5ChQs_n6Yw80ZTGfYZ8BgY/edit?usp=sharing
After analyzing my QRG I found out that I do not provide enough details on my introduction and conclusion paragraphs. Also I need to work on my transitions between certain paragraphs. However, I feel I provide good details and sources throughout my body paragraphs. Also provide smooth transition along with staying on topic within my document.
Steven
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